[24 May 2019]
I set my gaze towards
The mountain peak but found my
Feet still at the door.
Untitled haiku
21 responses to “Untitled haiku”
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Ah. I can relate. Lovely image, Nathan. Wishing you a wonderful weekend 🙂
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Isn’t it quite human? 🙂
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Totally human. 😊
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Isn’t it, though?
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This reminds me of the classic Christmas story “Rudolf the Red Nosed Reindeer” where they are singing “Put one foot in front of the other-and soon you’ll be walking out the door…” 🙂
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Hahaha love that!!
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Right??
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Very nice
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Thank you!
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You’re welcome
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This is wonderful!!
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Thank you so much 🙂
Oof, that one really speaks to me!
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And I as well!
Funny that I should read this today of all days…the mountain peak has never looked more daunting. Well written!
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Haha isn’t it funny how life works?
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Yup..
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And there my feet will stay, as I’ve no urge to climb a mountain! Enjoyed this one, thanks Nathan, and thanks for taking part in Click & Run.
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Haha I’ve not done it for quite some time and I am okay with that! Thanks for stopping by as always, Stevie 🙂
I encounter this apparition all the time. I tend to be grandiose, so I can relate to this totally. Nice haiku.
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Thanks, Tom! I think it is a very relatable experience!
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