Epiphany II

[22 May 2019]

Early winter morning train;
A pause, a turn and walk
Into the smoke;
Dew on the lip of the cliff.

16 responses to “Epiphany II”

  1. Accipiter G. Goshawk avatar

    I like the transition in this piece; the passage from the train to the cliff reminds me of an old black and white movie, where the character gets lost in the mist and finds himself somewhere else entirely.

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you so much. I love that reading of it. Very evocative!

  2. orkidedatter avatar

    Wow, You just have to make a movie🦋so few words, so powerful, how do you do it …
    I am impressed.
    Enjoy your day.

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you for your kind words! You would be a great person to make a movie with! We’ll have to do it one day!

      1. orkidedatter avatar

        That movie will be the greatest and rock the world🦋 Hold on to that thought, hold on to the dream – I will and I hope it becomes true.
        I will wait for you, when you are ready…
        Enjoy your day, make it great, because you are great🦋

        1. Nathan AM Smith avatar
          1. orkidedatter avatar

            awe, not me either🦋
            (I think I found you on instagram , I follow you…)
            Enjoy your day.

          2. Nathan AM Smith avatar

            I haven’t been been on Instagram in ages but now I’ll have to check! 😀

          3. orkidedatter avatar

            Ok, I have just started, one month ago..
            🦋thank you.
            Enjoy your day.

  3. Leofwine Tanner avatar

    I love it, succinct imagery

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you very much 🙂

  4. tomhudson avatar

    An image to behold in such a few words.

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you. Sometimes fewer is more 🙂

  5. Red Balloon avatar

    beautiful and sparse–as powerful as a telegram!

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you so much!

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