[27 May 2019]

I watched the back of your neck —
Smooth, strong, supple,
Standing out in the seat of the train and
Disappearing into the depths of your grey t-shirt.

13 responses to “Untitled”

  1. orkidedatter avatar

    How do you do that… with so few words and I get blown off the pitch…
    I wish you a wonderful day🦋

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Oh thank you!! I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Your kind words made me smile very big!

      1. orkidedatter avatar

        My pleasure🦋keep smiling.

  2. Sylvester Van-Johnson avatar

    Interesting lovely read.

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you very much! 🙂

  3. kristianw84 avatar

    You’ve got a wonderful way with words, Nathan!

    1. Nathan AM Smith avatar

      Thank you very much! And you as well!

  4. kristianw84 avatar

    My pleasure, & thank you!!

  5. anotherburninglady avatar

    Ooh, I like thissss! 🔥 feeling 🙂

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