[22 May 2019]
Early winter morning train;
A pause, a turn and walk
Into the smoke;
Dew on the lip of the cliff.
Epiphany II
16 responses to “Epiphany II”
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I like the transition in this piece; the passage from the train to the cliff reminds me of an old black and white movie, where the character gets lost in the mist and finds himself somewhere else entirely.
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Thank you so much. I love that reading of it. Very evocative!
Cheers!
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Wow, You just have to make a movie🦋so few words, so powerful, how do you do it …
I am impressed.
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Thank you for your kind words! You would be a great person to make a movie with! We’ll have to do it one day!
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That movie will be the greatest and rock the world🦋 Hold on to that thought, hold on to the dream – I will and I hope it becomes true.
I will wait for you, when you are ready…
Enjoy your day, make it great, because you are great🦋-
I cannot wait!!!!
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awe, not me either🦋
(I think I found you on instagram , I follow you…)
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I haven’t been been on Instagram in ages but now I’ll have to check! 😀
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Ok, I have just started, one month ago..
🦋thank you.
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You, too!
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I love it, succinct imagery
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Thank you very much 🙂
An image to behold in such a few words.
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Thank you. Sometimes fewer is more 🙂
beautiful and sparse–as powerful as a telegram!
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Thank you so much!
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